Prayer Closet

The girl was seven. It was her birthday. Her mother took her to the park. Then to the store. She let the girl pick out a toy.

The mother was a woman of faith. She had a prayer closet. She knelt there in the morning. She knelt there in the evening. It was her place alone.

The girl chose a rubber ball. Red.

They came home. The mother went to the kitchen to start dinner. Then the sound came. Tires screaming across the pavement.

The mother looked out the window. The red ball bounced in the street. She ran outside. The girl lay in the road, still.

That night, the father sat in the living room. The sun was going down. Shadows stretched across the floor as he lost his temper and blamed her; the gate had been left open.

Hours passed. The house was silent. He realized she had not come out of her prayer closet.

They found her there. Emergency crews cut her down from the hanger rack.

The apron was still knotted tight around her throat.

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3 responses to “Prayer Closet”

  1. Violet Lentz Avatar

    Oh my! You just never know what someone is praying for do you?

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  2. Michael Williams Avatar

    i remember i was on here back in 2011 – brief stint – and we had a woman whose 11 year old boy, after a multitude of counselor/medication attempts, hung himself in the closet. fucked me up for a good 4 months after. not sure what happened to the mother. she stopped posting a few months after the funeral.

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    1. Tom Darby Avatar
      Tom Darby

      Oh my goodness. I am sorry.

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